Friday, 26 June 2009
Friday, 27 March 2009
Editing Day 2
Editing Day 1
filming day 4
The Observer Evaluation

One film, which really motivated the planning of my thriller, was a film called “Eagle Eye”; this film inspired me a lot because of the way the director was able to create such tension that would just leave the audience asking so many questions if truth be told, it amazed me. It puzzles me sometimes how directors can think of such things, the director of the film by the way was D.J. Caruso. The main emphasis of my thriller; was to leave the audience asking questions and create a lot of tension; I wanted to try to create, to my ability, an atmosphere as similar to that of “Eagle Eye”. Here’s the IMDB page to the film:http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1059786/ and here’s the official film website: http://www.eagleeyemovie.com/



My thriller I would say was more representative of the teenage social group; mainly because there's only a use of teenage actors in the clip, and to me I don’t think adults would be too eager to go watch a film where it only included teenagers unless it’s very good. It would also appeal to both sexes because of the characters used and the situations the characters are placed in. Furthermore the situation used is also a representative of society, when there is a distressed situation between a man and women, the women is more likely to be in the distressed position and the man creating the distress because of how men are seen in a higher status than women, and men are judged to be stronger than women as well. Also the film wouldn’t’ be aimed at the higher social economic group of society, simply because of how the actors are dressed in th
The type of media institution that would distribute my film would
The audience for my media product would be in-between the age of 14-24 (10 yr age gap), both male and female of the white, black and mixed race ethnicity, and with a mid-wage salary in the working class, student’s social background. The way that I would attract this audience is by using a type of language, which appeals to that group, since the group is the typical group of society (working class) and are young, then certain informal language can be used lenient towards slang. Even the dress sense would appeal more to the audience as it’s a casual wear and isn’t very hard to buy, so maybe if the audience were to watch the thriller they may be wearing some of the clothing seen in the thriller. Furthermore the location of the thriller, it’s based near computers and in a college (you can tell by the log-ins on the computer) this automatically directs it to a certain group, which are students, they would suddenly pick up on the fact that there’s a log in and say hey I do that as well.
What really made the thriller great was the technology available to make such perfect work. With the availability of the Mac’s, is what made working on these thrillers easy, editing was so swift and straightforward after we were taught how to use the software which was final cut pro. Over time editing clips couldn’t be any easier, Fin



Evaluation



Our thriller doesn’t really represent a certain social group, however it shows a young average student, which could be portrayed as the youth of today. Her age and status is shown by the costumes and location (college) as it accompanies it and shows us that she is a student.

Over the process of making my thriller I have learnt how to use a lot. Firstly we had to get used to the Mac computers although I was already familiar with them. I learnt how to use final cut pro which was a hard task but once I got used to it was alright. I’m glad I learnt this as it has taught me new skills that I can use later on in my career. We learnt how to log and capture our work after each day of filming which was helpful in case we lost any film. This also helped me to get used to the Mac computers. We learnt to use sound track to put the sound into our thriller which actually played an important part of the editing. As well as using the computers we had to learn how to use the camera which was obviously the biggest part of the process. Luckily my group all pretty much got the hang of using them quickly and we didn’t experience any trouble with them. The cameras we used were very good and efficient and I’m glad I learnt how to work them. We learnt how to use WebPages such as www.blogger.com in which we had to leave regular blogs of our progress throughout the task. We also used www.vimeo.com to upload all our finished pieces. This was topped off by a viewing of the years work at the VUE cinema in Islington. This was a great opportunity and experience as its likely your work will never be shown on a screen like that again.


Looking back over my preliminary task I feel I have learnt a lot within the progression to the full product. I learnt that planning and organisation is very important as it provides the stability for you work and makes things run according to plan. Research is important to know about existing products. i learnt how to work well in a group and with my chosen team members. Most importantly i learnt to work under pressure and i am happy without final piece. Our thriller got a good reaction in the screening at the cinema, and therefore i believe we done well in our task.

Thursday, 26 March 2009
Evaluation
As part of my media coursework we had to create the opening of a thriller which lasted two minutes, including titles. A thriller is a suspenseful adventure story, play or movie. Thrillers have also been produce in the radio, theatre and television media. This genre is incredibly large and thrillers typically involve sudden plot twists and lots of red herrings. For example, keeping people unsure about what is going to happen.
The name of my media thriller was called ‘The observer’. At first we chose to name it ‘Unknown’ but as a group we didn’t like it and we also thought it didn’t relate with our thriller. The reason being the name was too common and we wanted the title to stand out from the rest. Our thriller is about a girl that is being watched by someone else. The plot of our thriller is that she has done something but she thinks she has got away with it. Then she receives an anonymous email and from that point she knows someone else knows what she has done. She then runs out of the computer room and down the corridor. By this point the unknown person sees hers and catches up with her.
The location of our thriller was set in college this was because it was easy access to locate. Also it was easy for our group because we could all just meet up and this came useful if we had to re-film. One member of the group decided to play the lead role in the thriller and others helping with the directing and editing. As it was set in college, the costume was very basic, trendy, everyday clothes because we wanted it to represent a college student. The actor was in college and we didn’t want anyone to notice her. By doing this it created suspense and tension because no one was expecting it.
Our group used a good range of shots from close ups, medium shots, extreme close up, long shots, over the head shot, high angle, low angle and many more.
We tracked the actress when she walk and runs down the corridor. We did this so the audience can see her from the back and front. It was also done so the audience can see where she is going.
At the beginning of our thriller it’s bright and clear. This is for the audience to establish where she is. Then getting towards the end we use a bit of colour to make it dark and dim. This is to show the audience that something strange is going to happen. When it came to editing we used several effects. One of them we used was a heart beating sound which was non- diegetic. This was when the actress is running down the corridor and she stops behind a door trying to catch her breath. Another effect we used was when we slowed down her walking when she runs through the corridor as this made her body look like it was in slow motion. To make our soundtrack we had to use Soundtrack Pro where we had to choose from a range of sounds. My group chose to use orchestra sounds this is because it contained strings and loud clashing instruments.
The social group that our media product represents is mainly for a younger generation who like watching thrillers. We purposely chose to film in a college because we knew what certain audiences like to watch and it appeals to them more.
The age range that would probably be interested into watching our thriller is between 16-19 year olds. This is because most people this age go to college and like to feel on edge with suspenseful and sensational action. In addition I am a teenager myself and I know what people like to hear and watch so this made it easier for me to produce a product to represent this social group.
Working class people will be drawn into my thriller because the characters we chose our working class themselves and I think it they can relate to it better than any other class. When we made our thriller there was no in particular gender or race it was aimed at. It was generally made for people who found thrillers enjoyable and appreciate the fast pacing and complex plots associated with this genre.
The media institution that would I would probably distribute my thriller are either a small independent UK release or release it over the internet on popular websites like YouTube or MySpace. This is because a lot of people use the internet everyday and would find it easier to access the newest and latest film genres. Whereas it is set in a standard college and is edited on an Apple Mac computer not a high tech computer that professionals use. We wouldn’t really need a big distributor because it will be only being shown in the UK, the country it was made in. The thriller was set on a low budget and a lot of people would probably not know about it. I would also make my thriller made for television this is due to the fact that a lot of people watch television and will appeal to a wider audience. Furthermore my film would be shown on the main channels therefore more people will be watching it.
The audience for my media product will be young teenagers or young adults. This is because the actress herself is in the same age range. There is no specific gender for the audience; it can be watched by anyone.
The way I can attract and address my audience is by the story line and the building up of the tension. The soundtrack is quite tense this is because it consists of loud instruments that clash with each other. This was purposely done to make the audience feel tense straight away. There is no dialogue in our film as we thought we didn’t need it. We thought by not adding dialogue it will make the thriller more interesting because you don’t know what is going on. The easiest way to market my film is to advertise it as much as possible. To make my film well known by the public I would advertise it on bill boards throughout the United Kingdom, so everyone gets a chance to see it. I will also advertise the trailer on the television during the adverts/ breaks. For more people to be interested about my thriller I advertise it in places I know young people go. For example, If you buy a meal in a restaurant the poster will be on the walls or their will be a promotion deal. Another way I could market my film is by asking main newspapers to have their say on the film and rating it.
From the process of constructing the thriller I found that using the final cut pro was very difficult this was because I have never used it before. As we used it more frequently it became much easier and good to use. Secondly, on a practical hands on level my experience with using the camera was not difficult this was because I had already used cameras before. On the other hand when it came to use the internet to process the blog and release the movie on vimeo. It wasn’t really a problem because I use the internet a lot and I knew what I was doing. By using the internet it has widened the potential audience for our product. The best part was choosing our soundtrack, as a group we listened to a wide range of music and played around with it to see which one suited the best.
When it came to using the Apple Macs at the start, I dint really understand what I was doing. It took a lot of playing about before I actually noticed what I was doing. I liked it when we had to capture the film and put in the input and output of the video this was really fun because it was easy to find.
Looking back from the preliminary task, I feel that I have learnt so much to the full product. This is because in the preliminary task I didn’t really know what I was doing. I have learnt how to plan my work carefully and write down any useful ideas. This is so the end result will be as you first pictured it. More over, I have also learnt how to overcome problems and finding the best way to address them. I have also learnt how to work as a group and putting everyone’s ideas together so we can produce a good film. The main thing that I have learnt is how to edit and film. Overall I have gained a good insight in the topic of genre this is because when I first started I didn’t know anything about it and thought a thriller had to be scary, but as we learnt about it more I realised there are other reason to it.
Evaluation Of Thriller

Our thriller was set in the College, the reason for this was because it was easy for our group to meet there and if we needed to re-film anything we would have to travel. As it was set in a college the outfit that the actress wore was her everyday clothes. The actresses casual, up-to-date, trendy approach to fashion show that’s she is off a young/teenage age that’s has an eye for fashion. This shows that she could be of an age of a teenager and represent her as a college student.


I think a smaller studio would want to distribute our film as it is just set in a normal college using video cameras and is edited on an apple Mac. The reason for this is our film is very low budget and would attract a small range of people. The benefit with working with a smaller studio is that it would be cheaper for them to distribute and save a lot of money. Also as it is only going to be shown in the UK, we wouldn’t need such a big company to distribute it as it is going to be shown only in the country it was made in. I also think that it can be released over the internet on popular websites like YouTube or MySpace. This is because a lot of people use the internet everyday and would find it easier to access the newest and latest film genres
The audience for my thriller would be teenagers or young adults ages between 16 - 19 as the actress her self is in this age range. The sex of the audience doesn’t really matter as a thriller can be watched by any sex as long as it gets the audience attention as it is aimed to. It could also been aimed at working class people because the characters we chose our working class themselves and I think it they can relate to it better than any other class. It was generally made for people who found thrillers enjoyable and appreciate the fast pacing and complex plots associated with this genre.
We will attract the audience by the tension of our film and by the storyline. The soundtrack is very thrilling as it has a range of violins and organs mixed together to create tension. This will get the audience wanting to watch it as it gets there heart pumping. There is no dialogue in our film as we thought that we wouldn’t need it. As it might distract the viewers from the actually point of the storyline. The title of the thriller also gets the audience to think what the film is about as it is just called ‘The observer’ and its not letting nothing else out about it.
When using the Apple Macs at first I found them a bit tricky, but after using them a couple of times it became easier and after that I got the use of them. I have learnt about all the inputs you have to deal to create a successful film. From the planning, to the filming, to the editing and then to viewing the final piece. I have learnt a lot of things such as how to log and capture a film, put in the inputs and outputs, edit a film together and create a film. I have also seen that if a scene is not filmed right or the way you wanted you might have to go back and re-film it again, which might become a pain for the group. But its something you got to get over to make the film be exactly what you wanted.
The cameras were easy to use as I have work with them before so this I did not have no trouble with. The final cut pro program was difficult to use at first but with a lot of practising and playing with, you start to find out were things or and it becomes simpler. The soundtrack was the most fun part to work with as we could listen to a range of sounds and play around with it. I learnt how to make a soundtrack and mix all the sounds together to make a good soundtrack. This was very enjoyable.
When I first started the preliminary I was confident in what I was doing but not as confident as I am now. I have learnt how the plan and organise my work into a production line so the thing goes exactly to plan and to deal with anything that doesn’t go to plan, which may happen while filming. I have also learnt how to work effectively in a group with everyone putting there views in and creating a successful film. I also learnt to understand the genre of thriller a bit more and that it didn’t have to be scary but leave the audience wanting to no what happened next. I have gotten better at editing and filming and think that I have improved a lot with all the work we have done.
The Observer from 283goswell on Vimeo.
Saturday, 7 March 2009
Editing Day 2
The media suite were hetic everyone was trying to complete there work but our group was relax as we knew we had done the best that we could.
We listen to Efosa soundtrack and it was really good it fitted the clip perfectly but there was a few extra bits that could have been added so as a group we helped pick out some other sounds so that it could be a perfect as possible.
Now all we had to do after that was add the soundtrack to the film and then add the credits. Me and Ava done the credits the lesson before but were told that they looked a bit girly so as a group on our final editing day we create the credits as a group and put it in.
We then had to pick a name for our thriller there was the name we wanted from the beginning the 'The Unknown' or 'Anoymous' but in the end as a group we thought the best name was 'The observer'
Our film was finish everything was done to perfection. We even stuck to the deadline of 3pm for all the media thriller. Even though in our class the deadline was 4.30pm as it was our 3hour media lesson.
This was a great relief for our group we had completed it in the deadline, when we watched over what we had done and it all put together i was very pleased with the work which we all put in. As a group we worked well together there was minor issues that we got over and all in all it was a great success. I am also happy that i got to work with this group as they were a great team =] =] Hopefully we get good marks and the audience like it when we watch it at the cinema. =]
Editing Day 1
We had to make sure with the clips that they fitted correctly to the story that we was trying to tell. This took a lot of time as sometimes i would go out of focus during filming or laugh and we filmed it several times so we had to find the best frame and put it all together
In this lesson we had finished the editing and when we looked back at it, i was very proud of the work that we had all inputed to make this thriller.
As a group we had started to look at soundtracks that fit with the thriller, Me and Ava then decieded that we would go an create the credits for the movie while Efosa and Rebecca continue to look for the sound tracks and add the little extra effects that were needed to the footage e.g slowing down some bits.
So everything was on track and the group was doing there best that we could do. Hopefully we will finish by the deadline on friday. We was ment to be meeting at lunch to finish the soundtrack !!
Filming Day 5
We all met at around 10 but Efosa was there from 9.20 so that he could get the camera and finish logging and capturing what we previously done in the lesson the week before.
Me, Rebecca and Efosa had to think of how we was going to end the thriller to make it as most thrilling as possible so we done a series of different types of ending. One, was me falling and running, which didnt work because the drop looked to fake. I had to do a running scene which took forever as i had to do everything over and over again and this was beginning to annoy me as we wanted it to be perfect.
In the end we finally got what we wanted to do and fixed up all of the other stuff that we needed to. This was our final filming day we had completed it. It was the most exciting thing i had heard. I no longer had to wear the same outfit over and over again. It was our week hoilday so we had to wait to we came back to complete it. That would be our first editing day =]
Filming Day 4
Efosa our directed had seen that there was some continuous errors, which we had made while filming. When he was re looking over what we had log and capture, and thought that it would be a good idea to polish up the little mistakes that we had made so that we could make the film to the best of out ability.
We also today had to think of how we was going to end our thriller, we had alot of thoughts in mind but just had to choose the perfect one.
Today was one of our short lesson and we couldnt fit everything we wanted in. We also didnt have a lesson on friday which was meant to be our other day. There was a media workshop on the monday in the half term that me and my group had all agree to come to hoping to finish our thriller and start with a bit of the editing.
Friday, 6 March 2009
Thriller Editing Day 2
Finding the right type of mood for the sound was the trickiest part, I had to decide how it would run throughout the whole clip. At first I wanted it to be calm at the start and the gradually speed up the tempo to increase the tension, but that got scrapped as I had realised that creating a soundtrack that was mysterious at start and then slowly increasing the tempo would be much more effective. So I spent time fiddling with the tools and instruments, and I had finally created a soundtrack which I was pleased with, it still needed some tweaking to It but I had decided to leave that for the tomorrow, because everyone in the group would be in and then we can decide on whether the soundtrack is good or not, or whether there’s anything else that needs to be added on.
So tomorrow came and everyone was in as expected, we divided the groups into two, me and Rebecca done the sound and some finishing touches to the clip, Ava & Annie went off to finish the credits. The editing wasn’t really tricky at all, we just had to distort some images and slow down a couple of scenes wasn’t no big. The soundtrack also got tweaked a bit just to improve the tension. Ava & Annie came back but had a problem with the credits, so we had to re-create the credits again which didn’t take very long. We got that done quickly and compiled the whole clip and we were done, the end product was made. All the hard work paid off.
Monday, 2 March 2009
Thriller Editing Day 1
Since not everyone was engaged in the work we were doing, we decided to split the group into two so that everyone has work to do. Me and Rebecca stayed editing while Annie and Ava went off to start the credits, shortly after that we had finally constructed a clip which me and Rebecca was pleased with, we would show the others later because lesson had now finished. All that was left to do now was the sound and some tweaks to the clip, so stay tuned for Thriller Editing Day 2 the final stand point. See Ya
Friday, 27 February 2009
Thriller Editing Day 2
Thriller Editing Day 1
Thriller Filming Day 5
Thriller Filming Day 4
Thriller Filming Day 2&3
Thriller Filming Day 1
Wednesday, 25 February 2009
Thriller Filming Day 5
In the end, we got everything that we needed done, done so we completed all of the filming today, that’s our millstone. So I guess you’ll have to stay tuned for what’s next up: Thriller Editing Day 1
Thriller Filming Day 2
Monday, 16 February 2009
First day of filming
This was the first time we started filming our thriller, it was a very tough day. We had a few problems this was because we couldn't film in the library so we had to film in a computer room. This meant that we lost key shots and we had to rearrange some of the scenes we originally planned but for our thriller to be good it had to be done. One of the shots that we lost was the bookshelf shot which would of taken place in the library. But as a group we knew we had to find the best solution that fitted with our thriller. There are several shots in our plan that we put down as not sure just incase we changed our mind and decided to do something different.
Filming day two and three
On Tuesday we did not have no college due to adverse weather conditions so the college was shut for the day. This means that we was not able to come in to college and do any filming. As the result of the snow my group has to now find time to catch up on the time we missed during the lesson.
Filming Day Three
On Friday we could not film because the room we normally use was booked by another class. This meant that we could not film once again so we decided to blog for the duration of the lesson instead. At this moment my group was getting very angry because quality time of filming had been wasted and the deadline was approaching very fast. Also we had only filmed the thriller once so we had a lot to do in a short space of time. There was only one day left to come in and get all the filming done so me and my group decided to take time out and come in.
Filming Day 2+3
Due to adverse weathers it wasn't possible for us to come to college because of the snow therefore this has slow our group down a lot with the filming as the college was close.
Filming day five
During the holidays me, Annie and Efosa came in to film the last scene of our thriller. Ava could not make it so we agreed to finish it without her. We managed to finish the last scene and iron out any continuity errors. The main person who took charge of the camera work was me and Efosa. Annie took part by playing the main character in the thriller. I think the day went really well because we used our free time to come in and complete our media work as the deadline was getting closer.
Saturday, 14 February 2009
Thriller Filming Day 4
We finally got to filming and re-filmed the scenes which was needed to re re-filmed, then we had to complete the last two scenes which we still haven’t done yet, we were actually meant to film one of those scenes today but ended up forgetting to do that. So we have decided to get it all done on Monday, let’s hope we don’t forget anything this time, fingers crossed.
We’ve also come up with various ideas for the last scene which we keep on changing, I guess we have to film all the ideas and see how it goes that's the best way for now because time is limited. So stay tuned for filming day 4, see ya.
Thriller Filming Day 3
Monday, 9 February 2009
First Day Of Filming
Today, was a very fun days as it was the first day, we had a range of shots and as the main character i had to do the same thing over and over again which became very annoying but in the editing it will be good that i had done it. We got many different camera angles and point of views so it brings in the thrilliness about or short film.
We couldnt fulfil all the things we wanted to do today as we needed a email from an unknown address but was not able to set it up from college so someone has to set it up from home. So we would have to film that bit another day.
The day ran smoothly and was really fun, the director of our play help alot as he would not let us go without fulfilling it to our full potential and repeating it just incase we done anything wrong. It was a long day and stressful day but in the end work out to be a good day... :)
Wednesday, 4 February 2009
Thriller Filming Day 1
Today we got a lot of the filming in which I am very proud of, everyone contributed to the types of shots we should include, so we started experimenting and created some nice shot angles. There were some shots which we couldn’t get in today because we didn’t have enough of the equipment needed, like the computer scene when the character receives an email, we couldn’t do that because the email hadn’t been made yet. So we have to re-film that on another day, which is a good thing cause we get to see if there are any other kinds of shots we could and should include, it also gives us some more practicing and time to go over what we’ve filmed, to see if there were any continuity errors.
So that’s the wrap of the first day, really pleased of what we done cause I was also directing the film as well. Everyone contributed but not sure if everyone done enough work needed, that’s what we need to improve on, so that's it until filming day 2, see Ya.
Tuesday, 27 January 2009
Thriller Practise
As this was only the groups second practical task, i believe that the task went well, and that the quality of the film was good. We managed to use a good range of shots, including a long shot, extreme close up and a shot reverse shot. The use of the 180-degree rule, also helped us with the plot of our story as it hid what was inside the bag, which left the the audience with unanswered questions, making it thrilling. At the beginning we also used a close up of just the shoes and the bag, which makes the audience ask questions almost instantly.
Friday, 23 January 2009
A Thrilling Read
In this task we were told to create a short thriller clip from a person reading a newspaper. To me this task was tricky, because reading a newspaper isn't very thrilling at all. So we had to come up with a thrilling idea, which didn't take as long as we expected, shows what four concentrated minds can do.
In our short clip we included various shots, which I think is good because we got to explore different camera angles and create different atmospheres from those angles. There was a particular shot which included me and the second character, what happened in this scene is that the second character was staring at me and I didn’t notice it, the clothing of the character made this scene even better because it created a dark atmosphere, which is what we tried to create, with the added lighting it even made the atmosphere more tense. There were some shots which didn’t work, like the tracking shot of me there were some continuity errors in that scene and the one before that.
The continuity editing didn't work as well as we expected, there were certain scenes which we just couldn't edit to change or make more effective or even remove these errors, but overall it worked well. So i was very pleased with what we created, there are some tips to pick up from it which is a good thing it can allow us to improve on the next time we’re filming.